Wasn't there going to be a comic?

I finished the first page, though I reserve the right to change the text some more before I upload it.

I believe it was Tolkien who said, "Revise. Revise. Revise."

That's not the only reason I haven't uploaded it, though. I've decided to add in another page before it.

It'll be a title page, informing you that this first chapter is a short prologue.

Page 2 is not progressing as fast as I'd hoped, mostly due to our new roommate's X-Box 360s. It is a potent pair of machines, and they have demanded a sizable tax on my free time. However, now that everybody has beaten Borderlands and Castle Crashers at least once, life seems to be returning to normal.

I hope to have the title page up by this evening, but I have errands to run, and the guy who actually owns this computer is going to want to use it at some point, so I make no promises.

Edit: Oh, dear. I just finished downloading the Star Trek Online Beta. What was I thinking?

Look on the bright side, I'm completely broke, so I'll have to stop playing when the game launches in a few days. See you then.

Apparently, you need a beta key, even in the "open" phase of this beta. Does this mean we need a new term for open betas that are actually open?